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A Fowl Goodbye: When My Feathered Friends Found the Pool

What a cluck-tastic morning turned tragic!

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There's a special kind of heartbreak that comes with finding a wet, still feather in an unexpected place. The story of Pelis and 7 is one that many of us know too well, even if we don't like to admit it. This wasn't a predator swooping in at dusk or a mysterious illness. It was a slab of wood, a little bit of water, and a miscalculation that turned a sunny afternoon into a permanent goodbye. The honesty in this post is what gets me. It would be easy to blame the ducks, the weather, or the universe for being a bit of a jerk. But no, the writer looked at their own handiwork and said, "This is my fault." That takes a kind of guts that's harder to find than a broody hen in a haystack.

Here's the thing about our feathered friends: they are not small dogs with wings. They are curious, determined, and absolutely convinced that any body of water is a challenge rather than a threat. The writer even noticed the little ones standing on that slab, but they were too small to stand in the water like the big birds. It's a tragic irony that the very thing meant to help the ducks, the slab, became the perfect little diving board for a tragedy. We all do this. We all build a ramp, add a step, or leave a gate open, thinking we're being helpful. Then we turn our backs for one minute, and the universe reminds us that our good intentions don't count for much against a two-inch drop into a pool. That's not a failure of love. It's a failure of our imagination. We just can't picture the worst-case scenario until it's already sitting in our hands.

If a reader came to me with this story, I wouldn't offer a list of ten safety tips or a lecture on pool covers. You already know you messed up. That's not going to help. What I would say is this: you gave them a good life, and you gave them a moment of kindness that most chickens never get. They had a human who cared enough to build them a little wooden bridge, even if it was flawed. And the fact that you're grieving this hard proves that they were loved, not just fed. That matters. It doesn't bring them back, but it's not nothing. And that missing hen? The one who might be broody or just gone? Sometimes the not-knowing is the hardest part. It's okay to hold out hope while also accepting that the coop might just be a little emptier from now on.

So here's the practical takeaway, and it's not about chicken wire or pool fencing. It's about giving yourself permission to mourn a mistake without letting it define your whole flock's future. You learned something about the height of a duck's step and the weight of a tiny chicken's wet feathers. That knowledge is painful, but it's not useless. Go check every water source on your property tomorrow. Not for them, but for the ones still scratching around today. And when you do, remember Pelis and 7. Not with guilt, but with the kind of quiet respect you'd give any creature who taught you something the hard way. That's the real fowl goodbye. It's not the last time you see them; it's the first time you look at your own setup and truly see it through their eyes.

From chickens

My babies are gone. An hour before this happened I had went outside to give food to my chickens and both of my babies were completely fine. I’m assuming they went to grab water in the pool and fell in and couldn’t get out. This was the first time this happened and it’s my fault. I had put a slab of wood in front of the pool for my ducks to be able to get in more easily And I had seen the chickens stand on the slab of wood to get water but they were all able to stand…

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